Comments on: How can I start my story 10 points for best answer?

By: Doey

Doey — Fri, 05 Mar 2010 14:47:59 +0000

put something like a flashback of her parents dying, then her siblings interrupt her and then put and intro of the person ^_^ good luck
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By: Lily

Lily — Fri, 05 Mar 2010 14:34:59 +0000

It was another boring morning. I have to wake up early everyday either I go to school or go to work. I wouldn’t have to though if my sister and bother could work, But since they are only 10. They can not. 3 years ago our parents die in a car accident they were 7 and I was 14. We were hurrying to go to the movies and we didn’t see it when it happen, but I think a car ran a stop light. When the car hit us. Our parents shielded us from it. All I could see was the blood flying everywhere. All I could hear was people sceaming and my siblings crying with the red liquid dripping down their faces. Enough with the sad moments! I got to stay strong and support my family. Since its the only three of us. And I’m the only one who can work. I got to keep the positives in and keep the negatives out. Today I got to work. My shift don’t end into 10:00. I’ll leave dinner in the fridge so when they come home they can a least eat something….Welcome how my I take your order. "Look its dinner girl" I feel sorry for her having to work in a dump like this. "Shh! She’ll hear you,Hahaha!" I don’t really care what they say about me. They don’t know anything about me. I wish sometimes that i could be….a normal 17 year old girl. But I can’t right now. "Click" Welcome how my I…"A guy that just walk in. He’s so hot. Its like that he isn’t even real. But somone like him woundn’t be interested in me. Um excuse me? Huh! Oh, I’m sorry!How may I help you. I would like a number 3 and your number….What! Oh, come on don’t play shy. I know that you think that I’m hot. No I do not! "It’s like he read my mind".

Ok that All ‘m writing. That should give you a head start. I was about to keep typeing, but then I relized That it is not my story. I gave you alot of good Ideas. I hope you write A good story.
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By: frybread

frybread — Fri, 05 Mar 2010 14:17:59 +0000

My hands are freezing. Some mornings after delivering the newspapers in this cold, rainy climate, I can’t feel my fingers and toes until I’m ready to go to my second job. I’m only 16, but I already feel like I’m 50. I love my little brother and sister, but I would love to have that feeling that other 16 year-old girls have – carefree, going to football games, looking for a prom dress.

It’s hard to believe that it’s been almost a year since…
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By: John T

John T — Fri, 05 Mar 2010 13:44:59 +0000

It was another hot,humid Florida morning….AND

If it were me, I would do this:

Repost this question in the category- Arts and Humanities

Sub category- Books and Authors

They are on the category list you scanned over before picking this category at the end…..OR if this was the " suggested category" picked by the AI program, you need to click on "All Categories" and choose the appropriate one.

I know it can be confusing….so many categories…BUT

Posting in the appropriate category will expose your question to many people who have experience and/or expertise in your subject. That way you’ll get more/ better answers.

The Yahoo Products category, sub category Yahoo Answers (Where You Are Now ) is where we Q/A about the website itself. You know, bugs, glitches, website operations etc.

Hope this helps….JT
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