Comments on: Creative Writing Story Structure- advanced Part 4/12

By: architectus777

architectus777 — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:14:28 +0000

It’s hard to say …
It’s hard to say without knowing what type of story it is, but there are several ways to have a character face their fear of spiders.

But if it doesn’t play into the story, then the MC need not overcome that fear.

For example if it is a fantasy, then you could have her face off with a spider woman enemy. half spider, half woman.

By: schlubbelybub

schlubbelybub — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:14:28 +0000

wow, these are …
wow, these are great videos, way better than any other video I’ve seen on youtube.

I want to give my main character a fear of spiders (because I have a fear of spiders too), but I don’t know how to confront her with it. do you have an idea?

By: SONofaJAY

SONofaJAY — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:14:28 +0000

these videos are …
these videos are helping me a lot. im trying to create a manga and the biggest problem for me was writing the actual story completley out and this has helped me plan it out a lot better. also while watching just thinking back on videos i can realize how much was put into my favorite mangas ive read

By: MistyAngel1990

MistyAngel1990 — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:14:28 +0000

Jack being an alien …
Jack being an alien in outer space who takes drugs and is abusive. Very interesting.

By: architectus777

architectus777 — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:14:28 +0000

it would be …
it would be difficult to pull off in a short story.

By: danicontessa

danicontessa — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:14:28 +0000

should you …
should you incorporate fears and strengths to this extent into a short story?

By: grpjlj2009

grpjlj2009 — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:14:27 +0000

fear of hospital …
fear of hospital cause his sister needs theraphy and its at the hospital.

By: totallymoah

totallymoah — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:14:27 +0000

lol. you said “So …
lol. you said “So i’m gonna make it pretty much, kind of like an earth planet, it’s an earth like planet.” you mean a planet like earth..my correcting is probably getting annoying…so..um…The story is becoming more interesting by the minute! you are amazing!

By: schlubbelybub

schlubbelybub — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:14:27 +0000

yes, it’s a fantasy …
yes, it’s a fantasy story, I forgot to mention..
thank you for sharing your idea, I think I’m eventually going to come up with something : )