does this photo story look okay, its for school. critics please.?

Posted by admin on February 25th, 2010 and filed under story critics | 2 Comments »

http://www.zshare.net/video/18892617976ec6e6/
nonono, its a photostory for a speech i have to do. we have to have a visual aid and thats mine, is it okay?

I think it’s very good and will defiantly be a good aid to a speech. The pictures you choose were good and very confronting but defiantly suit the theme. The only thing I can see is some of the words, mainly Tornadoes, are a little hard to read and should epidemics begin with a capital?

What is the speech about?, I think you will pass with a photo story like this! Also, I love the music; goes really well with the pictures!

Good Luck with the speech and presentation!

Hope I helped!
- Tab :)

2 Responses

  1. Den B7 Says:

    Nice pictures, but not much in the way of a story. Other than a list of natural conditions… I don’t get the point.

    If the assignment is supposed to get a message across… I’m not getting it.
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  2. Tab B Says:

    I think it’s very good and will defiantly be a good aid to a speech. The pictures you choose were good and very confronting but defiantly suit the theme. The only thing I can see is some of the words, mainly Tornadoes, are a little hard to read and should epidemics begin with a capital?

    What is the speech about?, I think you will pass with a photo story like this! Also, I love the music; goes really well with the pictures!

    Good Luck with the speech and presentation!

    Hope I helped!
    - Tab :)
    References :

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