Story

Just a relatively quick short story. =] This is my first short story and I made up the story so sorry if it is kinda bad!

By the way, if anyone watches my series, I’m not flaking out, I’m gonna be working on Underneath It All episode 3 next. x]

Duration : 0:9:34

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25 Responses

1. iiCrazyDemon Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   omg o-o its sooooo …
   omg o-o its sooooo gooood i got scared when alyssa came back and curious what wud happen next

2. mdmgk5 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   lol i never noticed …
   lol i never noticed that

3. lalalmfao Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   sad D:
   sad D:

4. bluewizzard9 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   er what do i dont …
   er what do i dont deserve?

5. sq1998 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   @bluewizzard9 its …
   @bluewizzard9 its 我不配

6. gabbygurloya Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   i hate crying =(
   i hate crying =(

7. ktmo123 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   pale skin, lol …
   pale skin, lol hmmmm >:( hate the series…

8. huggieswork Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   hmmmm Jake (short …
   hmmmm Jake (short for jacob) And bella i wonder where those names came from

9. bluewizzard9 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   this is a Chinese …
   this is a Chinese song by jay chou forgot what is was called

   SO SAD!!!!!!!5/5

10. beaux6 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    WIN
    WIN

11. Kaykayslayer1 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    wahhhhhhhhh *sob* …
    wahhhhhhhhh *sob* so sad

12. MrCookiesareftw Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    FAIL
    FAIL

13. Pung900 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    not quite sad …
    not quite sad though…well…to others it might be…i dont cry easily. i just feel moved….

14. clubpenguin2flora122 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    I cried a sea now! …
    I cried a sea now! *sniff*

15. PeaceLoveSandra Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    Oh My Gosh,
    Im …
    Oh My Gosh,
    Im Crying
    This Is SOOO Touching and sad.
    the end is what got me to cry.

16. Detectiveanimefan Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    so SAD!!!!
    so SAD!!!!

17. JingTheTheif Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    3 love stories with …
    3 love stories with the name Jake, witch is my name

18. randomkid300 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    i was thinking his …
    i was thinking his name was jake..then..naaaaw…when he passed by..i was like… OH MY GOSH! IT CAME TRUE!?!?!? WHAT THE HECK!?!?!?!?!

19. hidinfromrealworld Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    omg, this is soo …
    omg, this is soo sad! it made me cry

20. AngelAnisaRulez Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    pause at 9:05 and …
    pause at 9:05 and he’s kissing air lol?

21. LolyaZatsune828 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    he was a basterd to …
    he was a basterd to her. i wouldn’t fourgive him.

22. Emocookie131 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    T_T i think i cried …
    T_T i think i cried a river… that was soo sad

23. crhybh123 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    OMG i cryinggg i …
    OMG i cryinggg i cant belive itttttt JAKE IS SOOOOO PERFECT and hes GF soo betch o_o

24. SaraStar555 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    This was touching.. …
    This was touching… but I cried… I’ve used up a whole bunch of tissues now…

25. stargazergenz Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    very nice =)
    i like …
    very nice =)
    i like the way you make it

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