Story

This is my first short story, so it’s one of my most noobishh vids yet. [: So please no mean comments. D:
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Duration : 0:8:34

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25 Responses

1. xMysticalBladeGrlx Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   omg i cried…D= …
   omg i cried…D= great story though

2. aarshiyak7 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   wth mary’s sister …
   wth mary’s sister is so mean BLAH i think mary’s sister was a teenager so thats why she was acting so mean also u shouldve changed mary’s hair that would be good

3. XiaoCutie1 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   lol big baby!!
   lol big baby!!

4. crfracer50 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   Cookies?:) no a …
   Cookies?:) no a sister… Darn u munsterXD

5. WoahItsPorndrew Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   i laughed. MONSTUR! …
   i laughed. MONSTUR!!!! xDDDD for me its nothing sad.

6. lizamarlin Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   whats the music at …
   whats the music at the very first? D: its on maple story?

7. ChiaJiaWei88 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   What was the first …
   What was the first song ?

8. BigErin11 Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   i’m srry i just …
   i’m srry i just do’nt know…… what to say but…. im really srry

9. xDreamyDolx Says:
   December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

   i cried 2..sob… …
   i cried 2..sob…very touching…

10. xxfaint99x Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    @BigErin11 well…. …
    @BigErin11 well………ur lucky u still have ur sis……my friend who is lyk family 2 me………..she lost her lil sis at 10 days old……….nd i was there thru it all pretty much………

11. rediickulus Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    i cryed
    i cryed

12. piggywiggy135 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    You made me cry …
    You made me cry alittle lol o-o

13. xUcHiiHa Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    1:52 haha GIGANTIC …
    1:52 haha GIGANTIC BABY!

14. wendy19chen Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    monstur! ;x
    monstur! ;x

15. stacybug5475 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    haha Sissy? What ur …
    haha Sissy? What ur first word is sissy and not mommy!! Monstur? haha but it was sad in the end

16. mirandacosgroveroxs Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    im crying rite now …
    im crying rite now this story is so sad T-T im crying

17. BigErin11 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    im still crying …
    im still crying thats the sadest when i see antthing were a sister dies i’ll nonstop cry i don’t want to lose my sisters we have been having fights for a while now and i.. just can’t… take it any more!!!!!!

18. iCinnamonTari Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    Lmao 2:02
    Lmao 2:02

19. EricaCookies Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    @NotRandomLeaf
    …
    @NotRandomLeaf
    Speranzaria.

20. sillymona123 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    omg D:
    omg D:

21. Jepsiable Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    what song was right …
    what song was right at the end???

22. NotRandomLeaf Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    WUTS THE FRIGGIN …
    WUTS THE FRIGGIN 1st SONG I LOVE IT O_O ANYONE KNOWS CAN TELL ME TQ IN ADVANCE~~

23. ktbigbangfan1130 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    it made me cry when …
    it made me cry when mary died and cindy was mean to her it made me cry alot T>T

24. Neoy100 Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    THANKS!
    THANKS!

25. Eslius Says:
    December 16th, 2009 at 4:14 pm

    -cries- ….
    lols …
    -cries- ….
    lols to “sissy instead of mommy”
    “MONSTUR? D:” xD lols lols

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