this is only a passage from my story, (its not all about this woman)
I am 13 and I wrote this by myself. Thanks:)
We pulled up to her abandoned appartment, it looked a lot different from when I was younger. The paint was chipping, the blackberry and raspberry bushes were gone from the front of the aparment building, the neighborhood was dirty and grungy looking. We climbed the worn stairs to her old room to to find whatever my dad needed from the old building.
I wasn’t very close to her. I only met her a couple of times but I liked her. She was different, spunky, young, but she wasn’t very mature. Once I spent the night at her appartment when I was young. We watched movies, ate salty, buttery, popcorn, painted our nails even though at the time I didn’t wear nail polish, it was a regular old girls night out. I loved it, But my mom was angry that my dad had let me go without her permission. They fumed over the subject for a few days and didn’t talk much for awhile. I remember going to Renee’s house because my dad had to pick up something from her apartment, and I snooped into her attic. There was a door that lead outside to a small balcony that fit about two people my age, I was claustrophobic and didn’t like tight spaces so I tried to leave but the door was jammed, I pounded on the door but I could hear my dad and Renee having a conversation in the other room and they couldn’t hear me. I shouted to the neighbors that were outside, and started to cry in frusteration because I wasn’t loud enough. But finally someone from the lower part of the appartment heard me and stomped upstairs to complain to Renee, and they found me sobbing loudly on the balcony.
Good language, and mood. But check your grammar and punctuation, because there are a lot of punctuation errors. I like the idea. It is very gripping, I’d suggest changing some of the wording around because it is a little awkward in some places. But otherwise, you sound like you really have something good. 
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Celebrate Spontaneo on the release day of their record “For Those Who Can Whislte!”
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You can now buy your movie tickets directly on Facebook to see “Toy Story 3″ at http://DisneyTicketsTogether.com
The creators of the beloved Toy Story films re-open the toy box and bring moviegoers back to the delightful world of Woody, Buzz and our favorite gang of toy characters in TOY STORY 3. Woody and Buzz had accepted that their owner Andy would grow up someday, but what happens when that day arrives?
Toy Story 3 will be presented in Disney Digital 3D™ in select theaters on June 18th, 2010.
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TAYLOR SWIFT – Love Story (OFFICIAL MUSIC VIDEO)
TAYLOR SWIFT – Love Story (OFFICIAL MUSIC VIDEO)
TAYLOR SWIFT – Love Story (OFFICIAL MUSIC VIDEO)
TAYLOR SWIFT – LOVE STORY (NEW SINGLE)
[Taylor Swift]
We were both young, when I first saw you.
I close my eyes and the flashback starts-
I’m standing there, on a balcony in summer air.
I see the lights; see the party, the ball gowns.
I see you make your way through the crowd-
You say hello, little did I know…
That you were Romeo, you were throwing pebbles-
And my daddy said “stay away from Juliet”-
And I was crying on the staircase-
begging you, “Please don’t go…”
And I said…
Romeo take me somewhere, we can be alone.
I’ll be waiting; all there’s left to do is run.
You’ll be the prince and I’ll be the princess,
It’s a love story, baby, just say yes.
So I sneak out to the garden to see you.
We keep quiet, because we’re dead if they knew-
So close your eyes… escape this town for a little while.
Oh, Oh.
Cause you were Romeo – I was a scarlet letter,
And my daddy said “stay away from Juliet” -
but you were everything to me-
I was begging you, “Please don’t go”
And I said…
Romeo take me somewhere, we can be alone.
I’ll be waiting; all there’s left to do is run.
You’ll be the prince and I’ll be the princess.
It’s a love story, baby, just say yes-
Romeo save me, they’re trying to tell me how to feel.
This love is difficult, but it’s real.
Don’t be afraid, we’ll make it out of this mess.
It’s a love story, baby, just say yes.
Oh, Oh.
I got tired of waiting.
Wondering if you were ever coming around.
My faith in you was fading-
When I met you on the outskirts of town.
And I said…
Romeo save me, I’ve been feeling so alone.
I keep waiting, for you but you never come.
Is this in my head, I don’t know what to think-
He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and said…
Marry me Juliet, you’ll never have to be alone.
I love you, and that’s all I really know.
I talked to your dad — go pick out a white dress
It’s a love story, baby just say… yes.
Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh.
’cause we were both young when I first saw you.
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An Introduction music video for the 806 Underground and Collaborative EP produced by Phenomenal Entertainment and Xsept Productions. Original Track by Xsept 1. Written by Slate Stone & Xsept 1. Camera by Slate Stone & Xsept. Edited by Ben Mercado. (C)2010.
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My Shocking Story
Real Wolf Kids: The case of Nat Sasuphan, a young girl
living in Bangkok who suffers from Ambras Syndrome, a
condition that results in the body being covered with
thick fur
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Little Luigi loved his music and wrote a song nearly everyday. Here in his first adventure Luigi, with a little help from his family of course, attends his first audition, Pop Rivals.
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1st Story Book Jacket sketch
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